Black Ghost

Why Ch. 7-9 (REWRITE) Joe stood frozen in his place, staring at the man with the gun. He had now concluded that his day had just gotten worse, much worse. ...

First of all thank you all for the comments. After reading them I feel that this and ch. before it need some revising. I will rewrite the last few ch. ...

I'm not saying that, I am saying that it was the gunman's INTENTION to do that. I'm not saying who lived or died. Max may have died, or not.......who knows? ...

Ok, I will fix that thing about the rage and then calmness part. That kind of seemed akward to me too. Ok and good question about the kicking. You see ...

how? I can't change my user name when I go to edit profile.

You, know I think you are right, I should just combine it with this chapter since it is all one event. Thanx!

DANG IT! i can't change it.... oh well....... that sucks.

OK, just so everyone is not confused I am changing my nickname which is jchoufani, to magicman. just wanted everyone to know that :D :D ok so my new nickname ...

Yeah, that would be awesome! I should use this site one day. Maybe when I finish something good.

The cashier silently looked at Joe as he dialed the number on the phone. There was high tension in the air at this moment, and Joe's heart was beating a ...

Well....... Harry Potter Artemis Fowl Pendragon The Giver To Kill a Mockingbird

that's what I meant, sorry.

post hellos in the lounge please.

Thanxs! :D I hadn't noticed I used those phrases too much. I'll try my best to fix it :)

OF COURSE ITS NOT! i was just saying a lot will happen in the next ch. thats all. the length of it has nothing to do with how good it ...